Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 2:20 pm Post subject: My story!
use the website link at the bottom of this post to see my site, then click on "stories" _________________ You cannot catch, contain, nor destroy me. for I am energy.
I AM NOT A FOX, DAMMIT
You have goot a good 2 chapters there Astral!
While I have no idea what is going on, and I hate this Kyla. There is no way to tell what side is "good" or "bad." I would really like it if the Kyla team turned out to be working for evil causes, and that the ones inside of the station were fighting for something true!
My judgement on your story is based on the fact I hate, I mean HATE situations where one side beats the other so easily, like in your story. There is really no conflict that I can find, or any conflict at all. Just some vixen running through a stations killing others without reason. I hope the next chapters will explain the story better.
Good luck on your furture works, I am looking foward to reading them. _________________ Hamsters for life!
-=Should the need arise to wiggle to the right till feelings the resistance=-
I <3 Sel
I havent even begun to count casualties yet... there will be a lot of work for the anthropomorphic mortician... _________________ You cannot catch, contain, nor destroy me. for I am energy.
I AM NOT A FOX, DAMMIT
WHAT do you mean by all of that?! Casualties?? Mortician?!?
How long do you expect it will take untill chapter three? Is the whole story going to be just mass killings?..
_________________ Hamsters for life!
-=Should the need arise to wiggle to the right till feelings the resistance=-
I <3 Sel
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