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PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 4:31 pm    Post subject: The North Reply with quote

Chapter 1

As the battlefield echoed with the sounds of swords clashing against one another or slicing thru armor two lone furs stood behind the front lines. One of them was a siberian husky with a black cloak on and two short swords in his belt holding a bundle of what appeared to be rags in his arms, while the other one was a a red fox wearing a simple leather tunic and a dagger in his belt. "No, you must leave now Ren!" the husky was saying as he heard the yells and echoes get closer and closer. "Yea yea i know but i better get payed for this! This could cost me my life! And you didnt even tell me your name just this little things name!" replied the fox with anger in his voice. "My name does not matter now go! GO!" yelled the husky as he turned and ran towards the battle the fox turned and quickley sprinted with the bundle in his arms in the direction that he new was safest from this place, towards the southern end of the continent.

Chapter 2

"Stuart! You better wake up before i have to come in there and teach you a lesson!" came the angry growl of Ren from the bars in the cell door, "Because today is a special match and if you miss it...." he trailed off while he herad the creaking of Stuart's bed as he sat up. "Yes, i know Ren ALL of my fights are important, so could i get some breakfast and my gear down here?" the young fur replied in a sleepy growl. Stuart was a pure white siberian husky, that didnt know his parents or any family for that matter the most of a family he had ever know was Ren who had taken him to this arena he now fought in to pay Ren back from saving him from the humans. Soon Stuart was standing out in the middle of the hot open air dusty arena, wearing no armor but the pure white cloak that he wore during all of his fights and completly unarmed, surrounded by the growling yelling crowd jeering for more blood to fill thier lust. After a few minutes of waiting the gate on the other side of the arena opened and two wolfs, one male and another female, walked in both of them were holding hands wearing ripped and dented armor but two things stood out to Stuart. Hanging around both of thier necks was a pendent shapped like a crescent moon. 'Probably mates..' thought the young fur as he watched them both stop and stare at him as he gave them both questioning looks.

Chapter 3

As the crowd jeered and cheered for both the wolves and the young pup depending on whom they had bet on, the wolves slowly unclasped thier hands and slowly walked towards Stuart. The male started to growl and the female muttered something under her breath, they both smirked and rushed at the small husky. Suddenly the male was behind him and the female was still running at him from the front. but when they reached him instead of try to rip him to shreds or just incapacitate him they grabbed him and started running towards one of the walls. they jumped onto the ramparts of the lowest part of the wall and jumped over the to the otehr side into a world that Stuart had only seen through cell bars.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 12:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great Story! I did not expect the ending!
Well Made! But my favort part was the ending, I need to know what happens next now.
I felt sorry for Stuart, and was the first chapter related to other chapters?
I hope this is not the whole story, there is many questions that need to be answered!
Hope you will add on to this story! ^-^ Nice Job!



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